What do you think of my lyrics?

I like the lyrics. Although, if you had the beat and the music posted somewhere it would give me a more accurate feel of the song so I could give my opinion more thoroughly. Even though I said I liked it, I find the lyrics a tad sappy and corny. That really doesn't matter because Most songs are like that. Also, In the lyrics when you say "That keeps are heart beats in sync" the 'are' should be an 'our'. But, all in all, the lyrics were really good. I hope my criticism helped.